Satisfactory
Narrative writing
Annotations overview
Applies appropriate spelling, punctuation, tone marks and paragraphing to construct text
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Creates personal word bank -
2
Annotation 2
Plans and sequences events for story -
3
Annotation 3
Creates appropriate story title -
4
Annotation 4
Uses time phrase to detail information -
5
Annotation 5
Uses appropriate punctuation for quote -
6
Annotation 6
Uses language and structures appropriate to text type, audience and purpose -
7
Annotation 7
Constructs compound sentences using conjunctions, pronouns, adjectives, adverbs and familiar expressions -
8
Annotation 8
Concludes story logically, resolving the narrative
Satisfactory
Hung and the Dragon
Satisfactory
Making arrangements
Satisfactory
Comparing housing
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Expresses feelings -
2
Annotation 2
Describes housing -
3
Annotation 3
Compares Australian and Vietnamese housing needs and wants -
4
Annotation 4
Uses opinions to support argument -
5
Annotation 5
Uses relevant vocabulary to express ideas and information -
6
Annotation 6
Uses personal experience to reflect on differences -
7
Annotation 7
Uses a range of topic-specific vocabulary and grammatical structures -
8
Annotation 8
Applies spelling and punctuation rules -
9
Annotation 9
Concludes text logically
Satisfactory
School camp recount
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Writes date in appropriate order -
2
Annotation 2
Creates title for text -
3
Annotation 3
Uses time phrase -
4
Annotation 4
Recognises that tense can remain present when you use time phrase -
5
Annotation 5
Sequences events -
6
Annotation 6
Uses relevant vocabulary to describe activities and events -
7
Annotation 7
Uses conjunctions to connect ideas -
8
Annotation 8
Concludes with opinions and feelings about camp
Satisfactory
Mother’s Day letter
Annotations overview
Uses appropriate spelling, punctuation, tone marks and layout to compose text.
1
2
3
4
5
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Expresses purpose and context of letter -
2
Annotation 2
Uses conjunction to link ideas -
3
Annotation 3
Uses descriptive language -
4
Annotation 4
Uses expression 'Mẹ' as 'you' appropriately -
5
Annotation 5
Expresses wishes for future
Satisfactory
Narrative writing
Annotations overview
Applies appropriate spelling, punctuation, tone marks and paragraphing to construct text
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Creates personal word bank -
2
Annotation 2
Plans and sequences events for story -
3
Annotation 3
Creates appropriate story title -
4
Annotation 4
Uses time phrase to detail information -
5
Annotation 5
Uses appropriate punctuation for quote -
6
Annotation 6
Uses language and structures appropriate to text type, audience and purpose -
7
Annotation 7
Constructs compound sentences using conjunctions, pronouns, adjectives, adverbs and familiar expressions -
8
Annotation 8
Concludes story logically, resolving the narrative