Comparing Samples

1 Annotation 1
Summarises information about the life of an individual soldier based on verifiable sources 2 Annotation 2
Presents information in a detailed and well-structured text 3 Annotation 3
Presents a detailed chronology of a soldier’s service record

1 Annotation 1
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 2 Annotation 2
Describes a sequence of specific events in detail 3 Annotation 3
Creates a chronology of events based on information sources 4 Annotation 4
Acknowledges source of information

1 Annotation 1
Summarises information about the life of an individual soldier 2 Annotation 2
Records information found in a variety of sources 3 Annotation 3
Draws simple conclusions about the experiences of soldiers 4 Annotation 4
Acknowledges sources of information

1 Annotation 1
Summarises information about the life of an individual soldier based on verifiable sources 2 Annotation 2
Presents information in a detailed and well-structured text 3 Annotation 3
Presents a detailed chronology of a soldier’s service record

1 Annotation 1
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 2 Annotation 2
Describes a sequence of specific events in detail 3 Annotation 3
Creates a chronology of events based on information sources 4 Annotation 4
Acknowledges source of information