Comparing Samples

History

Year 8

Satisfactory

Description: Castles

1 Annotation 1
Gives reasons for the changing forms of castles 2 Annotation 2
Describes the key features of early forms of castles 3 Annotation 3
Describes the key features of later forms of castles

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Gives reasons for the changing forms of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Describes the key features of early forms of castles
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Describes the key features of later forms of castles
1 Annotation 1
Uses specific terms to identify and describe the features of castles 2 Annotation 2
Places changes in the construction of castles into a chronological context

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses specific terms to identify and describe the features of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Places changes in the construction of castles into a chronological context
1 Annotation 1
Makes a simple comparative judgement between different forms of castles 2 Annotation 2
Places the use and development of castles into a historical and locational context

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Makes a simple comparative judgement between different forms of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Places the use and development of castles into a historical and locational context

Above satisfactory

Description: Castles

1 Annotation 1
Places the construction of castles into a chronological context 2 Annotation 2
Distinguishes between various purposes behind the construction of castles 3 Annotation 3
Uses specific terms, details and examples to describe the construction of castles

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Places the construction of castles into a chronological context
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Distinguishes between various purposes behind the construction of castles
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Uses specific terms, details and examples to describe the construction of castles
1 Annotation 1
Uses specific terms, details and examples to describe the construction of castles 2 Annotation 2
Labels image to support a claim made in the text

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses specific terms, details and examples to describe the construction of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Labels image to support a claim made in the text
1 Annotation 1
Makes a connection between changing military tactics and weaponry and changes in castle design and construction 2 Annotation 2
Explains changes over time in the design and construction of castles

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Makes a connection between changing military tactics and weaponry and changes in castle design and construction
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Explains changes over time in the design and construction of castles

Satisfactory

Description: Castles

1 Annotation 1
Gives reasons for the changing forms of castles 2 Annotation 2
Describes the key features of early forms of castles 3 Annotation 3
Describes the key features of later forms of castles

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Gives reasons for the changing forms of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Describes the key features of early forms of castles
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Describes the key features of later forms of castles
1 Annotation 1
Uses specific terms to identify and describe the features of castles 2 Annotation 2
Places changes in the construction of castles into a chronological context

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses specific terms to identify and describe the features of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Places changes in the construction of castles into a chronological context
1 Annotation 1
Makes a simple comparative judgement between different forms of castles 2 Annotation 2
Places the use and development of castles into a historical and locational context

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Makes a simple comparative judgement between different forms of castles
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Places the use and development of castles into a historical and locational context