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History
Year 10
Satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument
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Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time -
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Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect -
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Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources -
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Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
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Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence -
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Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
Above satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument
1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between a range of historical actions, events and developments 2 Annotation 2
Analyses the relationship between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and makes a direct connection between the source and the historical argument 4 Annotation 4
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past
Makes connections between a range of historical actions, events and developments 2 Annotation 2
Analyses the relationship between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and makes a direct connection between the source and the historical argument 4 Annotation 4
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between a range of historical actions, events and developments -
2
Annotation 2
Analyses the relationship between cause and effect -
3
Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and makes a direct connection between the source and the historical argument -
4
Annotation 4
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past
1
Annotation 1
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past 2 Annotation 2
Uses data to justify an opinion 3 Annotation 3
Presents an argument supported by multiple pieces of evidence 4 Annotation 4
Creates a detailed text which draws a complex conclusion about the past
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past 2 Annotation 2
Uses data to justify an opinion 3 Annotation 3
Presents an argument supported by multiple pieces of evidence 4 Annotation 4
Creates a detailed text which draws a complex conclusion about the past
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Uses a range of information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
2
Annotation 2
Uses data to justify an opinion -
3
Annotation 3
Presents an argument supported by multiple pieces of evidence -
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Annotation 4
Creates a detailed text which draws a complex conclusion about the past
Satisfactory
Extended response: Responsibility for the outbreak of World War II
Annotations overview
Composes an appropriately structured text to convey historical information and argument
1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time 2 Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 4 Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past 5 Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence 6 Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past
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Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Makes connections between historical actions, events and developments across time -
2
Annotation 2
Makes connections between cause and effect -
3
Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources -
4
Annotation 4
Uses differing information sources to support an interpretation of the past -
5
Annotation 5
Structures text using argument supported by evidence -
6
Annotation 6
Draws a conclusion about the past