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Work Studies
Year 9
Above satisfactory
Journal writing: Dress and hygiene
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Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene 2 Annotation 2
Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot
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Annotation 1
Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene -
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Annotation 2
Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot
Journal writing: Dress and hygiene
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Reflects on the need for personal hygiene in the workplace 2 Annotation 2
Compares workplace requirements for personal presentation and dress
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Reflects on the need for personal hygiene in the workplace -
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Annotation 2
Compares workplace requirements for personal presentation and dress
Satisfactory
Journal writing: Dress and hygiene
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Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace 2 Annotation 2
Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace
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Annotation 1
Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace -
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Annotation 2
Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace
Above satisfactory
Journal writing: Dress and hygiene
![](/media/2160/ws-9-work-sample-2-ab.jpg)
Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene 2 Annotation 2
Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene -
2
Annotation 2
Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot