Comparing Samples

Work Studies

Year 9

Satisfactory

Journal writing: Dress and hygiene

1 Annotation 1
Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace 2 Annotation 2
Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace

Above satisfactory

Journal writing: Dress and hygiene

1 Annotation 1
Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene 2 Annotation 2
Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Reflects on a range of needs for personal hygiene in the workplace, providing reasons for good hygiene
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Provides a comprehensive description of the dress requirements of an army helicopter pilot

Journal writing: Dress and hygiene

1 Annotation 1
Reflects on the need for personal hygiene in the workplace 2 Annotation 2
Compares workplace requirements for personal presentation and dress

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Reflects on the need for personal hygiene in the workplace
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Compares workplace requirements for personal presentation and dress

Satisfactory

Journal writing: Dress and hygiene

1 Annotation 1
Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace 2 Annotation 2
Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Reflects on an article to draw conclusions about the importance of personal hygiene in the workplace
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Records conclusions about dress and personal appearance appropriate to the workplace