Above satisfactory
Machinima: Rowan of Rin
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Begins narrative with establishing shot, indicating location -
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Establishes narrative problem and challenge via speech bubbles
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Provides insight into character development via dialogue summary -
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Shows setting for key scene for narrative development -
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Builds sets in Minecraft and uses them to convey the narrative via screen captures presented in storyboard form -
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Indicates type of shot to be used to reinforce conflict -
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Indicates scene transition via a thought bubble -
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Uses a wall to visually symbolise the challenge faced by the main characters
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Indicates representative dialogue -
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Uses a range of different types of shots to convey the narrative
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Uses conventional narrative structure – the hero overcomes the challenge -
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Indicates key climactic scene
Below satisfactory
Machinima: Rowan of Rin
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Uses title, but difficult to read
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Includes image of the set built in Minecraft to recreate the narrative -
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Includes indicative dialogue, but it is incomplete and it is unclear who is speaking to whom -
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Includes image of location, but does not use a long shot to establish the setting
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Uses medium shot to emphasise the conversation
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Represents the narrative visually, but comic book style is used rather than storyboarding conventions
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Employs awkward use of space in these images and does not represent the characters
Satisfactory
Machinima: Rowan of Rin
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Gives key information about the narrative and its location via an establishing shot in the storyboard title frame
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Builds sets in Minecraft and uses them to convey the narrative via screen captures presented in storyboard form -
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Provides character motivation -
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Provides key challenge of the narrative
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Indicates close up shots to reinforce the narrative
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Provides design of key scene, visually indicating how the machinima will represent the events of the narrative
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Chooses a high-angle close up to reinforce danger in a key scene
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Shows climactic scene of narrative through a thought bubble -
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Uses low-angle long shot to reinforce the dragon's power
Above satisfactory
Machinima: Rowan of Rin
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Begins narrative with establishing shot, indicating location -
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Establishes narrative problem and challenge via speech bubbles
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Provides insight into character development via dialogue summary -
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Shows setting for key scene for narrative development -
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Builds sets in Minecraft and uses them to convey the narrative via screen captures presented in storyboard form -
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Indicates type of shot to be used to reinforce conflict -
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Indicates scene transition via a thought bubble -
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Uses a wall to visually symbolise the challenge faced by the main characters
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Indicates representative dialogue -
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Uses a range of different types of shots to convey the narrative
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Uses conventional narrative structure – the hero overcomes the challenge -
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Indicates key climactic scene