Comparing Samples

History

Year 7

Above satisfactory

Paragraph: Ancient Egypt

1 Annotation 1
Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies 2 Annotation 2
Includes detailed examples to support ideas about ancient societies 3 Annotation 3
Creates a structured text to present a historical analysis 4 Annotation 4
Acts on feedback to improve the text

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Includes detailed examples to support ideas about ancient societies
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Creates a structured text to present a historical analysis
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Acts on feedback to improve the text

Satisfactory

Paragraph: Ancient Egypt

1 Annotation 1
Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies 2 Annotation 2
Makes distinctions between sources and evidence 3 Annotation 3
Creates a structured text to present a simple historical analysis 4 Annotation 4
Reflects on learning

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Makes distinctions between sources and evidence
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Creates a structured text to present a simple historical analysis
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Reflects on learning

Above satisfactory

Paragraph: Ancient Egypt

1 Annotation 1
Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies 2 Annotation 2
Includes detailed examples to support ideas about ancient societies 3 Annotation 3
Creates a structured text to present a historical analysis 4 Annotation 4
Acts on feedback to improve the text

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses sources to make generalisations about past societies
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Includes detailed examples to support ideas about ancient societies
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Creates a structured text to present a historical analysis
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Acts on feedback to improve the text