Comparing Samples

History

Year 10

Satisfactory

Photo essay: An environmental issue

Annotations overview

Uses visual elements and choices to compose a cohesive historical text

1 Annotation 1
Outlines key people and events associated with an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Outlines key people and events associated with an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Uses data to describe an aspect of an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses data to describe an aspect of an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Identifies a turning point in the sequence of events 2 Annotation 2
Outlines the outcome of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies a turning point in the sequence of events
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Outlines the outcome of an environmental issue

Above satisfactory

Photo essay: An environmental issue

Annotations overview

Uses visual elements and choices to compose a cohesive historical text

1 Annotation 1
Describes the context of an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to frame the interpretation of an environmental issue 3 Annotation 3
Uses data to describe an environmental issue 4 Annotation 4
Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes the context of an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to frame the interpretation of an environmental issue
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Uses data to describe an environmental issue
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Provides an example to support a conclusion about events at Chernobyl

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Provides an example to support a conclusion about events at Chernobyl
1 Annotation 1
Describes actions and reactions associated with events at Chernobyl 2 Annotation 2
Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes actions and reactions associated with events at Chernobyl
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to support an interpretation of an environmental issue 3 Annotation 3
Describes events at Chernobyl

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses appropriate images to represent the nature and impact of an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to support an interpretation of an environmental issue
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Describes events at Chernobyl
1 Annotation 1
Uses data to analyse the environmental impact of events at Chernobyl 2 Annotation 2
Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to assess the historical significance of Chernobyl

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses data to analyse the environmental impact of events at Chernobyl
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses direct quotation from an acknowledged source to assess the historical significance of Chernobyl

Satisfactory

Photo essay: An environmental issue

Annotations overview

Uses visual elements and choices to compose a cohesive historical text

1 Annotation 1
Outlines key people and events associated with an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Outlines key people and events associated with an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Uses data to describe an aspect of an environmental issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses data to describe an aspect of an environmental issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses appropriate images to represent an aspect of an environmental issue
1 Annotation 1
Identifies a turning point in the sequence of events 2 Annotation 2
Outlines the outcome of an environmental issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies a turning point in the sequence of events
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Outlines the outcome of an environmental issue