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Health and Physical Education
Years 9 and 10
Above satisfactory
Research report: Health issue
Annotations overview
In this sample, the student demonstrates the ability to access and synthesise information from a range of credible sources to propose evidence-based strategies to reduce the incidence of skin cancer.
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Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution 3 Annotation 3
Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour 4 Annotation 4
Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
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Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue -
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Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution -
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Annotation 3
Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour -
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Annotation 4
Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
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Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer 2 Annotation 2
Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue 4 Annotation 4
Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue 5 Annotation 5
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue 6 Annotation 6
Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue
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Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer -
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Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue -
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Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue -
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Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue -
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Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue -
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Annotation 6
Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue
Below satisfactory
Research report: Health issue
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Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition 2 Annotation 2
Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time 4 Annotation 4
Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue 5 Annotation 5
Identifies two proposed responses to the issue
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Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition -
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Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue -
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Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time -
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Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue -
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Identifies two proposed responses to the issue
Satisfactory
Research report: Health issue
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Accesses information to identify the health consequences of smoking 2 Annotation 2
Uses credible sources to identify the health outcomes of smoking 3 Annotation 3
Accesses information to identify the prevalence of the issue over time 4 Annotation 4
Accesses information to identify initiatives that have attempted to reduce the incidence of smoking 5 Annotation 5
Makes a decision on the success of anti-smoking campaigns 6 Annotation 6
Proposes and justifies three responses to the issue 7 Annotation 7
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue
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Accesses information to identify the health consequences of smoking -
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Uses credible sources to identify the health outcomes of smoking -
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Accesses information to identify the prevalence of the issue over time -
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Accesses information to identify initiatives that have attempted to reduce the incidence of smoking -
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Makes a decision on the success of anti-smoking campaigns -
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Proposes and justifies three responses to the issue -
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Annotation 7
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue
Above satisfactory
Research report: Health issue
Annotations overview
In this sample, the student demonstrates the ability to access and synthesise information from a range of credible sources to propose evidence-based strategies to reduce the incidence of skin cancer.
![](/media/2029/hpe-9-10-ws2-health-issue-2014-718-ab_page_1.jpg)
Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution 3 Annotation 3
Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour 4 Annotation 4
Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue -
2
Annotation 2
Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution -
3
Annotation 3
Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour -
4
Annotation 4
Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
![](/media/2030/hpe-9-10-ws2-health-issue-2014-718-ab_page_2.jpg)
Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer 2 Annotation 2
Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue 4 Annotation 4
Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue 5 Annotation 5
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue 6 Annotation 6
Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer -
2
Annotation 2
Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue -
3
Annotation 3
Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue -
4
Annotation 4
Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue -
5
Annotation 5
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue -
6
Annotation 6
Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue