Comparing Samples

Health and Physical Education

Years 9 and 10

Below satisfactory

Research report: Health issue

1 Annotation 1
Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition 2 Annotation 2
Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time 4 Annotation 4
Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue 5 Annotation 5
Identifies two proposed responses to the issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue
  • 5
    Annotation 5
    Identifies two proposed responses to the issue

Above satisfactory

Research report: Health issue

Annotations overview

In this sample, the student demonstrates the ability to access and synthesise information from a range of credible sources to propose evidence-based strategies to reduce the incidence of skin cancer.

1 Annotation 1
Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue 2 Annotation 2
Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution 3 Annotation 3
Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour 4 Annotation 4
Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses heath information to identify people's behaviour in relation to the issue
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses research to highlight a problem and offers a solution
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Accesses detailed information to identify the short- and long-term health and wellbeing consequences of the behaviour
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Accesses detailed information from credible sources to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
1 Annotation 1
Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer 2 Annotation 2
Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue 4 Annotation 4
Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue 5 Annotation 5
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue 6 Annotation 6
Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Proposes an explanation for the increasing incidence of skin cancer
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Accesses detailed information to identify campaigns designed to address the issue
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Makes a judgement about the effectiveness of responses to the issue
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Proposes and justifies in detail three responses to the issue
  • 5
    Annotation 5
    Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue
  • 6
    Annotation 6
    Uses a range of credible sources to inform responses the the issue

Satisfactory

Research report: Health issue

1 Annotation 1
Accesses information to identify the health consequences of smoking 2 Annotation 2
Uses credible sources to identify the health outcomes of smoking 3 Annotation 3
Accesses information to identify the prevalence of the issue over time 4 Annotation 4
Accesses information to identify initiatives that have attempted to reduce the incidence of smoking 5 Annotation 5
Makes a decision on the success of anti-smoking campaigns 6 Annotation 6
Proposes and justifies three responses to the issue 7 Annotation 7
Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Accesses information to identify the health consequences of smoking
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses credible sources to identify the health outcomes of smoking
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Accesses information to identify the prevalence of the issue over time
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Accesses information to identify initiatives that have attempted to reduce the incidence of smoking
  • 5
    Annotation 5
    Makes a decision on the success of anti-smoking campaigns
  • 6
    Annotation 6
    Proposes and justifies three responses to the issue
  • 7
    Annotation 7
    Synthesises information to justify proposed responses to the issue

Below satisfactory

Research report: Health issue

1 Annotation 1
Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition 2 Annotation 2
Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue 3 Annotation 3
Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time 4 Annotation 4
Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue 5 Annotation 5
Identifies two proposed responses to the issue

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Uses unnamed sources to identify the health consequences of poor nutrition
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Uses unattributed statistics to identify the prevalence of the issue
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Makes an unsubstantiated claim about the prevalence of the issue over time
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Identifies one campaign that has been used to address the issue
  • 5
    Annotation 5
    Identifies two proposed responses to the issue