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Geography
Year 8
Below satisfactory
Short response: Changing nations
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Uses a simple example 2 Annotation 2
Identifies a push/pull factor associated with the movement of peoples 3 Annotation 3
Presents a generalisation 4 Annotation 4
Identifies some of the impacts of population growth from the provided data
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Uses a simple example -
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Identifies a push/pull factor associated with the movement of peoples -
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Annotation 3
Presents a generalisation -
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Annotation 4
Identifies some of the impacts of population growth from the provided data
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Locates migration data in a table 2 Annotation 2
Presents a list of simple reasons for trends in the internal movement of people 3 Annotation 3
Makes a simple prediction based on the interpretation of internal migration data
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Locates migration data in a table -
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Presents a list of simple reasons for trends in the internal movement of people -
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Makes a simple prediction based on the interpretation of internal migration data
Satisfactory
Short response: Changing nations
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Identifies and describes a number of push/pull factors associated with the movement of peoples 2 Annotation 2
Uses a relevant example 3 Annotation 3
Presents a simple explanation of the differing rural experiences in China and Australia 4 Annotation 4
Presents a simple explanation of the connections between rural and urban places 5 Annotation 5
Provides simple examples to show the connection between rural and urban places
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Annotation 1
Identifies and describes a number of push/pull factors associated with the movement of peoples -
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Uses a relevant example -
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Presents a simple explanation of the differing rural experiences in China and Australia -
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Presents a simple explanation of the connections between rural and urban places -
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Annotation 5
Provides simple examples to show the connection between rural and urban places
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Identifies and describes a number of push/pull factors associated with the movement of peoples
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Annotation 1
Identifies and describes a number of push/pull factors associated with the movement of peoples
![](/media/2877/2016-686-at_page_3.jpg)
Expresses data findings to show value and context 2 Annotation 2
Locates migration data in a table 3 Annotation 3
Describes some social, economic and environmental reasons for the internal movement of people 4 Annotation 4
Makes a number of predictions based on the interpretation of internal migration data
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Expresses data findings to show value and context -
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Locates migration data in a table -
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Describes some social, economic and environmental reasons for the internal movement of people -
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Annotation 4
Makes a number of predictions based on the interpretation of internal migration data
Above satisfactory
Short response: Changing nations
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Identifies three push factors 2 Annotation 2
Provides thorough explanations and specific examples of push factors 3 Annotation 3
Uses a relevant example to support a pull factor
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Identifies three push factors -
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Provides thorough explanations and specific examples of push factors -
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Annotation 3
Uses a relevant example to support a pull factor
![](/media/2873/2016-682-above_page_2.jpg)
Identifies and explains a number of pull factors associated with the movement of peoples 2 Annotation 2
Uses specific examples of pull factors to support explanations 3 Annotation 3
Uses environmental, economic and social factors to explain the differing rural experiences in China and Australia 4 Annotation 4
Provides specific examples that demonstrate the relationships between places 5 Annotation 5
Presents a detailed explanation of the interconnection of rural and urban places
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Annotation 1
Identifies and explains a number of pull factors associated with the movement of peoples -
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Annotation 2
Uses specific examples of pull factors to support explanations -
3
Annotation 3
Uses environmental, economic and social factors to explain the differing rural experiences in China and Australia -
4
Annotation 4
Provides specific examples that demonstrate the relationships between places -
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Annotation 5
Presents a detailed explanation of the interconnection of rural and urban places
![](/media/2874/2016-682-above_page_3.jpg)
Identifies and explains social, economic and environmental impacts of rapid population growth 2 Annotation 2
Supports explanations for social, economic and environmental impacts of rapid population growth with specific examples
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Identifies and explains social, economic and environmental impacts of rapid population growth -
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Supports explanations for social, economic and environmental impacts of rapid population growth with specific examples
![](/media/2876/2016-682-above_page_4.jpg)
Locates migration data in a table
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Annotation 1
Locates migration data in a table
![](/media/2875/2016-682-above_page_5.jpg)
Expresses data findings to show value and context 2 Annotation 2
Locates migration data in a table 3 Annotation 3
Provides specific examples to support explanation 4 Annotation 4
Explains in detail the social, economic and environmental reasons for the internal migration of people 5 Annotation 5
Uses relevant geographical terminology 6 Annotation 6
Uses specific examples to support predictions 7 Annotation 7
Presents a series of predictions based on the internal migration data
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Annotation 1
Expresses data findings to show value and context -
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Annotation 2
Locates migration data in a table -
3
Annotation 3
Provides specific examples to support explanation -
4
Annotation 4
Explains in detail the social, economic and environmental reasons for the internal migration of people -
5
Annotation 5
Uses relevant geographical terminology -
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Annotation 6
Uses specific examples to support predictions -
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Annotation 7
Presents a series of predictions based on the internal migration data
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Below satisfactory
Short response: Changing nations
![](/media/2880/2016-679-below_page_1.jpg)
Uses a simple example 2 Annotation 2
Identifies a push/pull factor associated with the movement of peoples 3 Annotation 3
Presents a generalisation 4 Annotation 4
Identifies some of the impacts of population growth from the provided data
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Uses a simple example -
2
Annotation 2
Identifies a push/pull factor associated with the movement of peoples -
3
Annotation 3
Presents a generalisation -
4
Annotation 4
Identifies some of the impacts of population growth from the provided data
![](/media/2881/2016-679-below_page_2.jpg)
Locates migration data in a table 2 Annotation 2
Presents a list of simple reasons for trends in the internal movement of people 3 Annotation 3
Makes a simple prediction based on the interpretation of internal migration data
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Locates migration data in a table -
2
Annotation 2
Presents a list of simple reasons for trends in the internal movement of people -
3
Annotation 3
Makes a simple prediction based on the interpretation of internal migration data