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Year 9
Above satisfactory
Source analysis and extended response: The Industrial Revolution
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source 4 Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source 4 Annotation 4
Explains and connects features of a historical period
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Explains and connects features of a historical period
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Places developments and events into a historical sequence and context 2 Annotation 2
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Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
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Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
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Supports conclusions using evidence drawn from an acknowledged source 2 Annotation 2
Describes features of a historical period based on observations from a range of sources 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Communicates ideas in a well-structured written text 5 Annotation 5
Draws a conclusion about the past and its relationship to the present
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Draws a conclusion about the past and its relationship to the present
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Explains the usefulness of a source within its historical context
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Satisfactory
Source analysis and extended response: The Industrial Revolution
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Draws conclusions from the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
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Connects historical developments and events across places and time periods
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Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source -
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Connects historical developments and events across places and time periods
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Draws conclusions from the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source 4 Annotation 4
Makes inferences based on the content of sources
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Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source -
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Makes inferences based on the content of sources
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
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Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
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Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source
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Draws conclusions from the content of a source -
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Makes generalisations about a historical period based on observations from a source
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Uses the content of a source to support observations about a historical period 2 Annotation 2
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Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
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Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
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Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources 2 Annotation 2
Makes generalisations about a historical period 3 Annotation 3
Uses the content of a source to support observations about a historical period 4 Annotation 4
Draws a simple conclusion about the past based on multiple sources
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Uses the content of a source to support observations about a historical period -
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Draws a simple conclusion about the past based on multiple sources
Above satisfactory
Source analysis and extended response: The Industrial Revolution
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source 4 Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Records features of a source to identify its type -
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Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source -
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Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source -
4
Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source 4 Annotation 4
Explains and connects features of a historical period
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Records features of a source to identify its type -
2
Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source -
3
Annotation 3
Makes generalisations about a historical period supported by specific details drawn from a source -
4
Annotation 4
Explains and connects features of a historical period
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Records features of a source to identify its type -
2
Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source -
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Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source -
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Annotation 4
Describes and connects features of a historical period
![](/media/5121/2019-186-above_page5.jpg)
Places developments and events into a historical sequence and context 2 Annotation 2
Supports conclusions using evidence drawn from multiple sources 3 Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Places developments and events into a historical sequence and context -
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Annotation 2
Supports conclusions using evidence drawn from multiple sources -
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Annotation 3
Uses direct quotation and acknowledges information sources
![](/media/5122/2019-186-above_page6.jpg)
Supports conclusions using evidence drawn from an acknowledged source 2 Annotation 2
Describes features of a historical period based on observations from a range of sources 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Communicates ideas in a well-structured written text 5 Annotation 5
Draws a conclusion about the past and its relationship to the present
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Supports conclusions using evidence drawn from an acknowledged source -
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Annotation 2
Describes features of a historical period based on observations from a range of sources -
3
Annotation 3
Analyses the perspective of a source -
4
Annotation 4
Communicates ideas in a well-structured written text -
5
Annotation 5
Draws a conclusion about the past and its relationship to the present
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Records features of a source to identify its type 2 Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source 3 Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source 4 Annotation 4
Explains the usefulness of a source within its historical context
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Records features of a source to identify its type -
2
Annotation 2
Records detailed observations of the content of a source -
3
Annotation 3
Analyses the content and perspective of a source -
4
Annotation 4
Explains the usefulness of a source within its historical context