Satisfactory
Written response: Community connections
Annotations overview
In this sample, the student demonstrates an understanding of how local resources can be used to support the physical activity of community members. The student selects activities to support their own physical activity at one local venue and provides a strategy to promote physical activity.
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Identifies three places in the local community where they have been physically active -
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Identifies five local resources that support people's health and wellbeing and where people can be physically active
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Describes two ways to connect personally with a community resource and increase opportunities to participate in physical activity -
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Identifies a physical activity and a plan to engage in and promote the activity to a wider audience
Above satisfactory
Written response: Community connections
Annotations overview
In this sample, the student demonstrates a deep understanding of how local resources can be used to support the health, wellbeing and physical activity of community members. The student selects a number of strategies to support the health, wellbeing and physical activity of community members at one local venue and provides a comprehensive description of a strategy to promote physical activity.
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Identifies four places in the local community where they have been physically active -
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Identifies a range of local resources that could be used to support people's health, wellbeing and physical activity
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Describes a variety of innovative ways to connect with a community resource -
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Identifies a range of activities that could be used to support health, wellbeing and physical activity -
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Selects and describes a strategy to promote and engage the community in a wide range of physical activities
Below satisfactory
Written response: Community connections
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Annotation 1
Identifies three places in the local community where they have been physically active -
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Identifies local resources where people can be physically active
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Describes one way to use a community space to engage in physical activity -
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Selects a strategy to promote physical activity
Satisfactory
Written response: Community connections
Annotations overview
In this sample, the student demonstrates an understanding of how local resources can be used to support the physical activity of community members. The student selects activities to support their own physical activity at one local venue and provides a strategy to promote physical activity.
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2
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies three places in the local community where they have been physically active -
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Annotation 2
Identifies five local resources that support people's health and wellbeing and where people can be physically active
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2
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Describes two ways to connect personally with a community resource and increase opportunities to participate in physical activity -
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Annotation 2
Identifies a physical activity and a plan to engage in and promote the activity to a wider audience