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- Written response: Identity - ABOVE
Health and Physical Education
Years 5 and 6
Above satisfactory
Written response: Identity
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Annotation 1
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin 2 Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life 3 Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships 4 Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity 5 Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin 2 Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life 3 Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships 4 Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity 5 Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin -
2
Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life -
3
Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships -
4
Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity -
5
Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things
Below satisfactory
Written response: Identity
1
Annotation 1
Explains how climate impacts on physical activity interests and opportunities 2 Annotation 2
Explains how one person supported the development of a personal quality 3 Annotation 3
Identifies one way identities can change
Explains how climate impacts on physical activity interests and opportunities 2 Annotation 2
Explains how one person supported the development of a personal quality 3 Annotation 3
Identifies one way identities can change
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1
Annotation 1
Explains how climate impacts on physical activity interests and opportunities -
2
Annotation 2
Explains how one person supported the development of a personal quality -
3
Annotation 3
Identifies one way identities can change
Satisfactory
Written response: Identity
1
Annotation 1
Explains how living near water influences physical activity interests 2 Annotation 2
Explains how three people have shaped interests, attitude and achievements as part of identity 3 Annotation 3
Discusses how feelings impact on personal behaviour
Explains how living near water influences physical activity interests 2 Annotation 2
Explains how three people have shaped interests, attitude and achievements as part of identity 3 Annotation 3
Discusses how feelings impact on personal behaviour
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Explains how living near water influences physical activity interests -
2
Annotation 2
Explains how three people have shaped interests, attitude and achievements as part of identity -
3
Annotation 3
Discusses how feelings impact on personal behaviour
Above satisfactory
Written response: Identity
1
Annotation 1
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin 2 Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life 3 Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships 4 Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity 5 Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin 2 Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life 3 Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships 4 Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity 5 Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies positive influences of place, culture and family while growing up in country of origin -
2
Annotation 2
Identifies and explains how people and experiences have influenced their identity and attitude to life -
3
Annotation 3
Provides an example of the link between emotional wellbeing and relationships -
4
Annotation 4
Identifies that moving countries can change a person's sense of identity -
5
Annotation 5
Uses a personal example to show how identities can change over time as people experience new things