Comparing Samples

Health and Physical Education

Years 7 and 8

Above satisfactory

Written response: Personal safety

1 Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
1 Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
1 Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices

Satisfactory

Written response: Personal safety

1 Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies when to use a deflection statement
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
1 Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
1 Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices

Below satisfactory

Written response: Personal safety

1 Annotation 1
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements 2 Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
1 Annotation 1
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
1 Annotation 1
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk

Above satisfactory

Written response: Personal safety

1 Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
1 Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
1 Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices