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- Written response: Personal safety - ABOVE
Health and Physical Education
Years 7 and 8
Above satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
![](/media/2069/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_1.png)
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
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Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk -
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Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
![](/media/1987/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_2.jpg)
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
![](/media/1986/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_3.jpg)
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
Satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
![](/media/2070/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-319-at_page_1.png)
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement -
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Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
![](/media/1988/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-319-at_page_2.jpg)
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
![](/media/1989/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-319-at_page_3.jpg)
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
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Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario -
2
Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
Below satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
![](/media/2071/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-340-be_page_1.png)
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements 2 Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements -
2
Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
![](/media/1990/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-340-be_page_2.jpg)
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
![](/media/1991/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-340-be_page_3.jpg)
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk
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Annotations
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Annotation 1
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk
Above satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
![](/media/2069/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_1.png)
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
-
Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk -
2
Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
![](/media/1987/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_2.jpg)
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
![](/media/1986/hpe-7-8-ws1-personal-safety-2015-334-ab_page_3.jpg)
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices