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Health and Physical Education
Years 7 and 8
Satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
1
Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
1
Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
1
Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario -
2
Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
Above satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
1
Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk 2 Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Describes in detail how deflection statements can reduce risk -
2
Annotation 2
Describes and justifies appropriate strategies to diffuse each situation -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies that include immediate action
1
Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies a wide range of cues that indicate it may be unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes and justifies an appropriate strategy to reduce the risk in the situation
1
Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies aspects of the situation that make it potentially unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes a range of appropriate rules and provides reasons for their choices
Below satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
1
Annotation 1
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements 2 Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements 2 Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation 3 Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Provides a basic explanation for deflection statements -
2
Annotation 2
Provides a simple strategy for managing the situation -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes an appropriate and safe reporting strategy
1
Annotation 1
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Describes cues that indicate the situation is unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes a simple strategy that could be used
1
Annotation 1
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk
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Annotations
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1
Annotation 1
Identifies an informed reason why the scenario may be unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Identifies three basic rules to minimise risk
Satisfactory
Written response: Personal safety
1
Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
Identifies when to use a deflection statement 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations 3 Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
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Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Identifies when to use a deflection statement -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate deflection statement for each of the three situations -
3
Annotation 3
Proposes appropriate and safe reporting strategies
1
Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe 2 Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
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Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Identifies a range of cues and signs that indicate the situation is unsafe -
2
Annotation 2
Proposes an appropriate exit strategy to reduce the risk
1
Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario 2 Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices
-
Annotations
-
1
Annotation 1
Provides an explanation of the safety issues in the scenario -
2
Annotation 2
Develops a set of rules that will minimise harm and provides appropriate justification for their choices