Comparing Samples

Health and Physical Education

Years 7 and 8

Below satisfactory

Written response: Respectful relationships

1 Annotation 1
Identifies two personal qualities that make a good friend 2 Annotation 2
Identifies how friends make them feel included 3 Annotation 3
Identifies one factor that influences how they interact with others 4 Annotation 4
Identifies a range of people that they can talk to for help and advice

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies two personal qualities that make a good friend
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Identifies how friends make them feel included
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Identifies one factor that influences how they interact with others
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Identifies a range of people that they can talk to for help and advice

Satisfactory

Written response: Respectful relationships

1 Annotation 1
Describes a range of ways that relationships impact on wellbeing 2 Annotation 2
Describes a range of influences on feelings and emotions 3 Annotation 3
Provides detailed description of their personal qualities and skills and the impact on friendships 4 Annotation 4
Lists a range of places that they can go to for help and advice

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes a range of ways that relationships impact on wellbeing
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Describes a range of influences on feelings and emotions
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Provides detailed description of their personal qualities and skills and the impact on friendships
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Lists a range of places that they can go to for help and advice

Above satisfactory

Written response: Respectful relationships

1 Annotation 1
Describes a range of personal qualities 2 Annotation 2
Provides a number of reasons why the personal quality is important to respectful relationships 3 Annotation 3
Assesses their qualities and skills as a friend 4 Annotation 4
Describes a range of character strengths that support good friendships

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Describes a range of personal qualities
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Provides a number of reasons why the personal quality is important to respectful relationships
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Assesses their qualities and skills as a friend
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Describes a range of character strengths that support good friendships
1 Annotation 1
Evaluates individual factors that may influence the way they interact with others 2 Annotation 2
Evaluates environmental or external factors that may influence their emotional responses and the way they interact with others 3 Annotation 3
Explains the importance of good relationships to wellbeing

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Evaluates individual factors that may influence the way they interact with others
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Evaluates environmental or external factors that may influence their emotional responses and the way they interact with others
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Explains the importance of good relationships to wellbeing
1 Annotation 1
Identifies where to go for help or advice 2 Annotation 2
Provides a range of examples of how to support a friend in need

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies where to go for help or advice
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Provides a range of examples of how to support a friend in need

Below satisfactory

Written response: Respectful relationships

1 Annotation 1
Identifies two personal qualities that make a good friend 2 Annotation 2
Identifies how friends make them feel included 3 Annotation 3
Identifies one factor that influences how they interact with others 4 Annotation 4
Identifies a range of people that they can talk to for help and advice

  • Annotations

  • 1
    Annotation 1
    Identifies two personal qualities that make a good friend
  • 2
    Annotation 2
    Identifies how friends make them feel included
  • 3
    Annotation 3
    Identifies one factor that influences how they interact with others
  • 4
    Annotation 4
    Identifies a range of people that they can talk to for help and advice